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« on: August 09, 2008, 11:06:15 pm »

Hi people!

Coming October me and my friends are gonna tape a pilot for our own sitcom about the patients and nursing personnel in a mental institution. It'll consist of 5 parts of about 5 minutes each, making it a 25 minutes episode. For 5 weeks we'll put a part on YouTube, and our own site.

Since it's all in Dutch, and I'd like to share the comedy with whoever wants to see it, I'm gonna add English subtitles. There are several language jokes and puns, and it will be hard to translate those, so it'd be appreciated if you people could think along.

The pilot will be about a twentysomething year old girl's first day in the institution. She says she's clairvoyant, but according to the psychiatrist she's just suffering from delusions.

The only question for now: Who can think of a good, funny, cool, whatever English title fora dark sitcom about a couple of mentally ill people and their equally disturbed supervisors?

Gr, Rax
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« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2008, 05:49:16 pm »

Anyone?

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« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2008, 09:57:38 pm »

Whoops, didn't see this.
Sorry.

How about:

- Off The Deep End
- Totally Bedlam
- Insane-itarium
- Pushing The Limit
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« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2008, 11:07:50 pm »

Mental!

(Yes, including the exclamation Mark and the italic script )
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« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2008, 07:58:40 pm »

Whoo! I like Insane-itarium and JackAce's title. Have to think about this...

@ NG: It's a combo of insane and sanatorium, right?

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« Reply #5 on: August 20, 2008, 08:30:00 pm »

Yep, it is.

Also:

- Unhinged
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« Reply #6 on: August 22, 2008, 02:05:26 pm »

And of course:

- Insanity and Genius
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« Reply #7 on: August 24, 2008, 07:44:53 pm »

Okay, now for some dialog. There will be more, but here's a start.

Literary translations are in green.

Text number 01:

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QUINTUS AND BEN WELCOME NEW PATIENT DAME NOSTRA. THEY WALK TO AN OFFICE, BUT SHE CAN'T KEEP UP WITH THEM BECAUSE OF HER HEAVY LUGGAGE. BEN WRITES IN HER RECORD.

BEN
“Treu-ze-laar.” (“Dawdler.”)

QUINTUS
Ster. (Star.)

BEN
Een ster in treuzelen? (A star in dawdling?)

QUINTUS
Nee, ‘n vrouwelijke treuzelaar: Treuzelaarster. (No, a female dawdler: Dawdle-star.)

Well, Ben and Quintus are acting very anti-social. They don't help her carrying the luggage, in stead they note in her record that she's a slowcoach, among other things.
The problem is that all this can't possibly be translated literary. "Treuzelaar" is a male dawdler, add "ster" to the word and you've got a female dawdler. So who can come up with a nasty remark from Ben and a dialog between him and Quintus?
The English dialog may be completely different from the original, as longas it's on the subject.

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« Reply #8 on: August 24, 2008, 08:10:03 pm »

Text number 06: (Yep, not chronological.)

Sylvester, one of Dame Nostra's fellow patients, fancies her, and during lunch he starts flirting (horribly bad).

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SYLVESTER
Heb je liever dat ik jouw brood beleg, of dat ik jou bloot beleg?

Means something like "You rather have me dressing up/buttering your bread roll, or me lying naked on top of you?"

The joke is that "dat ik jouw brood beleg" and "dat ik jou bloot beleg" - except for one letter L/R - sound exactly the same.

Best I can come up with is: "You rather have me dressing up your roll, or the two of us undressing and roll?"

But since "rolling" is associated with sex by only a small number of people, I'm hoping someone can come up with a better English version.

Like the other dialog above, the English dialog may be completely different from the original, as long as it's on the subject. Lunch, plates, bread, butter, table wear, seats, chewing, honey, milk, whatever...

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« Reply #9 on: August 27, 2008, 04:55:05 pm »

Pretty hard, eh?

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« Reply #10 on: August 27, 2008, 09:34:54 pm »

"Do you want me to butter your roll or would you rather 'butter my roll'?" *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*
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« Reply #11 on: September 02, 2008, 03:11:39 pm »

Hi guys, haven't been able to check the empty lately. Just wanted to let you know I appreciate your help.

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